prologue of another new story....

Yeah I write too many stories....
Anyway, this one's about these two kids who are taken into the ocean and find themselves in the middle of this enormous prophecy.....

I'm bad at summaries.

Just read, k?! XD

Prologue
“They’re coming. The two humans to fulfill the prophecy are coming right to us.” A blonde-haired merman stared at radar that was starting to beep faster and faster.

“Sebastian, you were wrong the last hundred times. How do you know these are the ones for sure?” A thirteen-year old merman with messy black hair crossed his arms in front of his chest and flicked his tail irritably.

“Hundred is an overstatement.” Sebastian snapped. “It was 99, to be exact. But anyway, I just have a feeling. Brayden, prepare the whirlpool.”

“That’s what you said the last 99 times.” Brayden sighed. He pulled the lever slowly and a small vortex began to appear.

ooooooh! I love mermaids! I'm so excited to see a story about them ^_^
This is definitely an intriguing beginning.

One question though: is Sebastian older/younger than Brayden? You never really mention it.

Other than that, good! "That's what you said the last 99 times" is such a funny line!