Unnamed Story
4 posters
Page 1 of 1
Unnamed Story
Here's what I have so far of a story that I've had in my mind for a bit. Enjoy.
---
I walked along a desolate road through the darkness, as it was well past midnight. Every step echoed off the walls of the tall city buildings. Ahead of me, I saw an intersection, with a dim streetlight at the corner. Partially standing in the light was a man wearing all black and a hat which shadowed his face. I slowly approached the dark man, and stopped beside him. I could see that he was holding a briefcase. He raised his head a bit and looked at me. After a moment he said quietly,
"Are you a friend of Matthew?"
"No, he is my brother."
The shadowed man handed me the briefcase. I opened it and peered inside, and saw a loaded pistol. I closed it again and nodded to the man, confirming that I knew what I needed to do. I continued to walk past the man, into the darkness of the night.
---
~Hucota
---
I walked along a desolate road through the darkness, as it was well past midnight. Every step echoed off the walls of the tall city buildings. Ahead of me, I saw an intersection, with a dim streetlight at the corner. Partially standing in the light was a man wearing all black and a hat which shadowed his face. I slowly approached the dark man, and stopped beside him. I could see that he was holding a briefcase. He raised his head a bit and looked at me. After a moment he said quietly,
"Are you a friend of Matthew?"
"No, he is my brother."
The shadowed man handed me the briefcase. I opened it and peered inside, and saw a loaded pistol. I closed it again and nodded to the man, confirming that I knew what I needed to do. I continued to walk past the man, into the darkness of the night.
---
~Hucota
Hucota7- Royalty
- Location : USA
Posts : 79
Re: Unnamed Story
wooooow..... this is very suspenseful!!!!! I LOVE it! And it's very descriptive. I love that phrase "the shadowed man".
Post more soon please!
Post more soon please!
Moshda- Royalty
- Location : USA
Posts : 188
Re: Unnamed Story
Cooool! looks good so far!
Delilah Roze- Civilian
- Location : Somewhere Over The Rainbow
Posts : 62
Similar topics
» Unnamed sci-fi story.
» My Just So Story
» My new story! Chapter one
» my dragon story.....idk what to name it
» prologue of another new story....
» My Just So Story
» My new story! Chapter one
» my dragon story.....idk what to name it
» prologue of another new story....
Page 1 of 1
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
|
|