Regret

This is a Poem i wrote the other night when i wasnt feeling to good. thought people might like it. tell me what you think.

Confusion and Regret
spinning inside me
trying to escape
but being held inside
what have i done?
I messed up
I was afraid
But why?
He wouldnt harm me
he was hopeful
I was dumb
He says its okay
I say its not
He says he loves me
I try to see the truth
Hidden in his eyes
Deep within him
I hide with shame
Not wanting to be found
but he finds me,
pulls me out from darkness
he holds me
tells me everythings okay
I dont listen
I continue to regret
to feel pain
to be confused
upset
alone
continous
confusion and regret
spinning inside me.

You are indeed talented. Your post is brimming with literary grace.

Sorry for the late reply... I feel so terrible for accidentally ignoring you!

I love the visual, descriptive nature of your poem. Even though the words are simple, it paints a vivid picture for us as readers. For me, at least, I really feel a depth of emotion coming from it. Phrases like "spinning inside me/trying to escape" and "pulls me from darkness" really add a lot to it.

May I just suggest using some punctuation to help us separate the phrases from one another in our minds? It will help your meaning to be very clear. Again, great job!