Fleeting Time [Freeverse]
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Fleeting Time [Freeverse]
by Hucota7 Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:02 pm
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How quickly time can slip away
Elude our grasp
Refuse to stay.
All the moments lost to time
Drift away
Without a thought.
After they have come and gone,
We wish them back
But it’s too late.
Maybe this is meant to be,
Maybe it is fate.
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How quickly time can slip away
Elude our grasp
Refuse to stay.
All the moments lost to time
Drift away
Without a thought.
After they have come and gone,
We wish them back
But it’s too late.
Maybe this is meant to be,
Maybe it is fate.
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poem for english class. :3
~huco
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Re: Fleeting Time [Freeverse]
by Moshda Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:06 pm
O.O wow that's sooooo good! I luuuurve it <3 I like the little rhyming thing you've got going on at the beginning and the end. It really helps tie everything together.
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Re: Fleeting Time [Freeverse]
by Delilah Roze Thu Sep 02, 2010 1:29 pm
Ooooh, me likey! LOL, this is really good! I like how it sort of has a circular motion to it. It starts at the beginning, and then it ends at the ending, if you know what I mean. Like it's the perfect length, and you began and ended it perfectly.
Confused yet?
Confused yet?
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