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Unnamed Story

Post by Hucota7 on Tue May 25, 2010 4:24 pm

Here's what I have so far of a story that I've had in my mind for a bit. Enjoy.

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I walked along a desolate road through the darkness, as it was well past midnight. Every step echoed off the walls of the tall city buildings. Ahead of me, I saw an intersection, with a dim streetlight at the corner. Partially standing in the light was a man wearing all black and a hat which shadowed his face. I slowly approached the dark man, and stopped beside him. I could see that he was holding a briefcase. He raised his head a bit and looked at me. After a moment he said quietly,
"Are you a friend of Matthew?"
"No, he is my brother."
The shadowed man handed me the briefcase. I opened it and peered inside, and saw a loaded pistol. I closed it again and nodded to the man, confirming that I knew what I needed to do. I continued to walk past the man, into the darkness of the night.

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~Hucota

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Post by Moshda on Tue May 25, 2010 4:28 pm

Shocked wooooow..... this is very suspenseful!!!!! I LOVE it! And it's very descriptive. I love that phrase "the shadowed man".

Post more soon please!

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Post by Delilah Roze on Tue May 25, 2010 6:02 pm

Cooool! looks good so far!
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Post by Zach S on Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:11 pm

AHHH the suspense o.o
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